by Lost Soul 691 Feb 16, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
My head is spinning |
by aDORKable x3
Ah, I deffinately know that feeling!! When you can never get to the computer and all you have are 700 scraps of paper with bits and pieces of poems. Well done!! Take Care Now and Thanks For The Comments! |
Hey this is indeed a good poem, really liked it. |
by Kalika
Wow, it's beautiful. I absolutely love it, especially the last stanza. I'd give it a 7/5 if I could. |
Wow, this poem was simply fantastic! i love the way each stanza was so short, it almost seemed to imitate the way in which ideas flooded your head but couldnt be let out, and imitating small scarps of paper. I love the way you wrote the third stanza, it was really impressive. |
by Tori
All of your poetry is amazing. I can definately relate to this one. Reminds me of my scrawl on pieces of wrinkled, torn paper... I'm not too organized, then again, the best thinkers aren't. ^_^ [5/5] |