You're right its not necessarily the rhythem or the rhyme but the soul and heart behind those bleeding words that echo the pages shadow when you read it.

thnxs for reading my poem adn that was exactly what i was tryign to portray..sumthings i find hard to give to Him though i kno i shoudl so it takes me a little longer i guess...please read some more of my poems if u fidn iunterest..it woudlo mean a GREAT dea lto me and i will start reading all of ur poems..thnxs again.

always in Him
Lissa