Nice poem lissa!! i loved this poem it was sooo romantic!! 5/5

Wow! perfect choice of words. expressive, beautiful phrases. no one can compare to this delicate work of art.

Love you're poem so0o0o0o so0o0o much LOLZ Keep writing.
***Lambchop:*

Your poetry is so beautifula nd poetic!! i love how you repeat the same stanza lke its a song and everything! that was a beautiful and there is nothing you should change about it!!