Pretty good. :o)

michelle

Reminds me of a song more than anything. Good stuff, I liked it.

Wow. this has such a smooth flow. I lyke the repeativeness, its almost lyke someone's whispering it in your ear. great job XXXXX
JL

Wow... this kinda gave me chills. it was either that or the haunted house im in right now. either way great job!! loved it.

5/5
-ARP

This poem was chilling. Again the emotion was portrayed really well giving this poem a dark effect. The imagery was amazing and vivid. Well done on this nicely penned dark poem~mel

Hmmmm...interesting