SnowFlakes Falling

by myxlittlexcut   Feb 16, 2006


Snowflakes falling
from the sky,
glistening teardrops
shine in her eye.

The cold night howls
-so long and dark-
Soft cries escape
a pained broken heart.

Dancing sugarplums
demoniacally chant.
Ignoring the voices
-she just can't-

Fire's burnt out...
only ashes remain.
Warmth of her body
is hard to retain.

Haunting dreams...
Tortuous night...
Consuming insanity
an endless fight.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I really like poems about nature and this one is no exception. I find that the Nature section of Poems and Quotes is where some of the best poems are found. I like writing Love poems and find that I incorporate many nature themes into them. There are a lot of poems in the Love section but there are only a few that really shine where in the nature section I find the opposite – most of them are very good. I enjoyed your poem and hope to read more from you in the future. If you like trees you can read a poem I wrote called – The memory of my shadow. The poem Searching also has a nature theme - I wrote this way too long ago when I was a kid and have thought many times to rewrite it as an adult. But somethings are better left the way they are no matter how badly you wish to change them.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kylie

    Wow, this is an amazing poem. I love the rhyme scheme & the way it flows. And it really puts pictures in my head.

    *Great Job*

    x.xBrokenx.x

  • 18 years ago

    by Millions

    Thanks for your comment, it was meant to be a song when i wrote it so good guessing!! This is such a great poem, loved it xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Wow. Nice visual. I liked it. It makes me think of you being like on a harsh winter night. 5/5
    -Vino

  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    I really like this one. Really powerful.

    5/5

    Mallori

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