That was really good. i liked it

Great poem! thanks for your comment, it means so much. stay strong and take care,
-xXx-

This poems captures the very essence of a dark problem I was blown away by the perfect flow 5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

I do not see how this poem is a 4.8. it shoudl definately be a 5!!! that was wonderfully written!! the rhythm was fast and it matched the stuff the girl was going through. the imagery in the words was flawless!! great poem!!

Nice poem talking about a girl in the pit of dispair and pain, trying to make it through one more day. Taking about her disperation and being very discriptive.

-Tainted Mikochan

Wow that was well i dont know it was awesome i guess i loved it!!!!!
best poem i have read today
keep writing
love always
tabby

Nice. 5. comment and rate on mine maybe? it would be apreciated but only if you want to. i dont want to waste your time.

Very good poem I loved it keep up the good work, I hope things are going well for you now!

Keep it up!!

Thanks for you c/r
-Josiah

Awesome poem, I especially liked
"the taste of sweet death is at her tongue" nice word choice, 5/5

Oh my gosh i absolutley loved your poem it was so good!

Wow..that was a bad a** poem! fu**kin awsome,thanx for the coment sweety..great writeing..i wanna check out the rest

I liked the poem but my i ask why it is called smoke of Beath??

This is one of the best poems i have ever read! It has been added to my favourites list!!!

Ok first off you pome is poser sounding but
i have to complament you it. it has the meaing in it wich is what i like to read so i give you a diserved 5.

I loved it

Wow, very good darling. Keep up the good work ur a very talented writer, great imagery!
-Jenna xo

Godo poe i think you couldve gone more into detail though.....what did the gurl feel as she touched the knife?? things liek that good poem though keep it up hunn u have such talent.

LISSA

Brief, straight 2 the point n i like it, the imagery is crazy, keep it up

I LOVE THIS POEM I HOPE U READ MY POEMS AND TELL ME WHAT U THINK.

Wow that was a well good poem! im knew and it is probs 1 of the qbest iv read so far!