VERY GREAT POEM!!

nick

Well listen i know i can make you happy by telling you this well listen i know a relationship is good but did you ever think of him being your friend.
I've been in that situation before so read my poems if you need answers oh yeah and good and great poem keep it up i loved it

This poem rocks hard core......well written.....I

This is gorgeous, you have an amazing talent! i love all your poems!

This is gorgeous, you have an amazing talent! i love all your poems!

This is gorgeous, you have an amazing talent! i love all your poems!

Wow took my breath away!!!

Great! i love it. and all of ur poems

And you say your not a good writer. this was great I enjoyed reading it. Keep strong.

Honestly, its very typical. no offense. i like to be honest. but for what it is. its pretty good. like the first line. with the smoke and stuff.

Wow it gave me chills at the end.

I really liked the title a real hooker. The poem in itself was intriguing to read but somewhat lacked lustre for me...

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