The rhyming was a bit forced at times, but other that that you really got your feelings out. Amazing job.
Suicide is never an option though, and definitely not a "must". Take care of yourself.
~Jaime

That was excellent...5/5

I agree with it never ends this cycle of self hate its cruel but u must learn to deal with it and begin to move on with our life to incredible and great things

If dis is true then pls dnt top urself... its a gud poem ... very depressing but very gud at the same time... I no depression is 1 big cycle but remeber suicide is final so u realy need 2 think bout it long n hard... but sooner or later ur life will get better .. u wont be depressed 4 ever if u try n do sumin bout it... makin urself sik aint the way try another way cos dat will onli make it worse... x x x x x Luff AmBeR x x x x