Nightmare

by killme_while i sleep   Feb 17, 2006


Rest his soul undermind
take his life in to time
close his eyes let him hear
bury his body all in fear
hear the voices
loud and clear
make him scream
death is near
take his life open wide
split his brain deep inside
out of breathe panting hard
wake up its just the dark
close your eyes rest you soul
only hell will take its toll
satan came while you slept
took your life as you dreampt
and its only a nightmare

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  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    Awesome poem Really liked all the darkness in it! Keep it up! ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by Moose

    Pretty dark for a short poem. I just suggest working on the ending some. I dont like the sudden conclusion of how you portray it as a nightmare. It could use a LITTLE more work. NOt much though. Nice poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Breesasha

    Encore

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