by killme_while i sleep Feb 17, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Rest his soul undermind |
Awesome poem Really liked all the darkness in it! Keep it up! ^_^ |
by Moose
Pretty dark for a short poem. I just suggest working on the ending some. I dont like the sudden conclusion of how you portray it as a nightmare. It could use a LITTLE more work. NOt much though. Nice poem. |
by Breesasha
Encore |