Cut cut slash slash finished

by unkmown   Feb 17, 2006


As i take this razor,
i slowly cut my flesh

even though i feel the pain,

it seems to me,
i cannot stop,

it is no longer a pain releaser,
but has become an addiction,

the blood is running down my arm
as it leaves its wound,
the blood darkens,

and i start to feel the pain,
someone help me its getting to painful,

the razor drops,
i leave this world,
and realise i cut to deep
and commited suicide

Plz rate and comment i wanna see what you think

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  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    DAMMMMMMMMMMMM THIS IS SOME
    deep deep s**t. there's so many
    poets on this site that do this.
    what does it do for you. how did you know to do this>? i relly want to know
    i can't even stick a pin in me to get a splinter out without crying like a baby lol. cy another on the poem like all yours. if you see any poems as good
    as the two i told you about holla

  • 17 years ago

    by Steph

    That sucks bout your dad deleting your poems uhg...but anyway i i like it..i used to be liike that and stuff...but yeah =]

  • 17 years ago

    by girl

    Very very DARK. i KIND of know what this is about sinse my friend did it when life got her down. but this is really sad.......i like it. :]] people shouldn't juge others who do this until they know what it's like. keep it up. :]] oh and sorry about the whole thing with your dad deleting your poems.......i would have read them. :p
    5//5. PLEASE ADD MORE POEMS SOON! --TaraNicole

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