by XxFallenxFromxGracexX Feb 17, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I see you walking with your gun raised high |
This poem began beautifully. A clear depiction, and then as it continued you added to this picture whilst creating a metaphoric sense that could be related to war as well as a day-to-day basis. |
by TinyDancer46
Omg! I don't even know what to say. This poem gave me chills up my spine! Wow, you are such an incredible writer... I loved the rhyming, the flow, the story...EVERYTHING. xoxo |
by dora
A heartfelt p0em darl. great use 0f w0rds. thank u s0 much f0r the c0mments 0n my w0rk. meant al0t t0 me! |
by Fallen
So sad :( |