by Bethan
Wow dis wos an amazin poem..luvd it...luvd it...luvd it. Beautiful story, beautiful imagery and beautifully written!!!!! 5/5 (if der wos mor dan 5 id r8 it at dat but der aint so Im afraid 5 will have 2 do!!) |
by aDORKable x3
This poem is SOO adorable!! I love it!! |
by sonia
Ur right it didnt make much sence but it still was a pritty good poem like all of youir work... |
by Samantha
Oh wow! This poem was just so cute! And yes it did make sence! Tinydancer you never stop amazing me! I love every word of every one of your poems, and this one is definetly one of my favorites of yours! Keep it up hun! I always be keeping an eye out for new work from you! Its honestly amazing! |
by Tisha
Nikki, |
by obsessedgurl
It definitly makes sense, it was just an excellent and creative use of a metaphor.... |
by tabithaa
No way |
by Paige
Your poems are FANTASTIC something a silly as a mitten can mean so much if you think about it as you have proved ur great i love your peoms keep it up lol WAHWWWW |
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by firexflys
This was so cute i love the last part this |
by Cuddles
This makes perfect sense, girl, and it's so CUTE!!! I adore this poem so much. Awesome! |
by shobhana kumar
Beautifully done! this is a really unique pece of creative expression! |
by Atomic
I am still amazed with this poem, so amazed that you are most certainly going on my favourite's list. |
by Amber
WOW!... ur such a good writer.. way cute peom, realy sweet ... XxX Amber XxX |
by JAY Poet
Wow great poem i loved it so much girl and thanks for all the comments man my computer is not really working good so sorry for taking so long to comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
by one.love
Whoa. |
by i am only me
Wow, i like this so much, i almost started crying me being way to emotional at times, its so cute |
by kallie
So cute!! nice twist in the end!!! i like the metaphor!! great job once again!! |
by Erica
Omg!! that was such a cute poem!! wow. great job. |
by Unbreakable
It's great =) |