Damn, Your Poems keep getting better and better. 50 zillion out of 5 man!

The rhythem was a little shaky in some parts. Some lines seem to be missing a beat. Fix it up and it shud be great :)

A brilliantly written funny poem... brought a smile to my face :] I thought it was very vell done. Great flow... nice rhyming.
Keep it up!

Hehehe,, that easy ay, cool poem.

Haha. Nice, well written. 5/5, Em