U Loved Me Before

by LJ loves Rob   Feb 17, 2006


I wish all your dreams come true
I loved you
Im only 16
when i wake up from the dream
Ill never forget the time

Its the story about a girl
For a time you changed her world
the sky turned blue
and a fairytale came true
U Loved me then

Though im not sure anymore

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mark

    Vee, rhyming doesn't have to be in all poems.

    It was a little confusing, yes.. but I liked it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Vee

    Its ok but try to work on ur ryming

  • 18 years ago

    by Neil

    I like ur rhyming hunni its in tune, altho its sad it has sumting

    thanks 4 sharing it wit me...

  • 18 years ago

    by Ripple

    In some way i found this poem powerfull. its full of confusion but thats wot love is. xxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by DaN

    Wow theres so much emotion in this
    short lines n switching from 3rd 2 1st person have a great effect, nicely written!

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