I liked this poem, its very very good, the only thing id say to make it better is to make it longer.
well done
Tara xxxx

Very nice job!! I liked the way things flowed...there is always room for more but there doesnt have to be anything else added. I really liked it:) Keep it up!! Check out my poems and tell me what you think please...THANKS and GREAT JOB!

Very good poem liked it a lot!

Liked this poem a lot 5/5

I like your honesty in this poem, makes for a better experience for the reader basically.