Hmm, This was good! Although I do Think it could go a little deeper. Maybe try and explain what they're listening too, And why it's making them sad. Jus digg it in deep.

And thank you for the comments. much appreicated! I hope you don't take my comments the wrong way. I just try to help make it better. But I do Think this deserves a 5.

- Natalie x-x