Nice poem. Very sad. Well done.

I can also relate to it. I'm not sure if that's a good thing haha

I believe it's normal to think about ending your life, when you life is such a mess. But I guess we are still here, sharing our thoughts and feelings in a poetic way. So that a good thing.

Just keep writing! Well done,
lotsaa love -xxx-

This poem is really good. Your way better then me mine suck.Lol

Alana

Wow really powerfull poem i luv it. xxxxxxxxxxxx lots of love p.s there is always sum1 hu loves u no matter how small u hav always touched sum1's life in sum way

Awwh, I really enjoyed reading this.
It was so very sad but a pleasure to read.
I thought the rhyming in the last stanza seemed kind of forced but other than that you did a wonderful job.

Hmm, awesome, but I 100% know you can do it better! Keep trying!

#Ayu

P.S: You have my rating! ;)

Aw thanks Ayumi ^_^ I know I can do better than that and I'm workin on it I appreciate your vote and comment ^_^

***Jackie***