This poem is beautiful...it really tells what we feel when we dream about love and hate it to fade...its nice..

I wish I could describe you
You're nothing but a dream
Leaving me so empty when I wake up
With only a feeling to scream

I would sleep forever
Just to dream you again
Oh, can't you come to me
To free me of this pain?
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dont think of sleeping forever as i hv this intuition in me...ur dream has to come true for sure...i hv been feeling in ur last couple of poems the way u hv fallen for a very lucky guy.. :o)
hope u guys to be together soon forever.
lovely poem indeed

take care and all the best
5/5

This is such an awesome poem.
I need to fall in love...sigh...

This is a really good poem girl..i can relate alot to it...perfect

This is a really good poem girl..i can relate alot to it...perfect

Hi Michelle
lovely bit of work here. i love the title - it draws the reader into the poem so beautifully and each stanza justifies the beauty of the title.

sorry haven't been commenting of late on your work!

thanks as always for your encouraging comments on my work!

love and peace
shobhana

Amazingly written. i dun0 if dats a w0rd. l0lz =p great j0b. t0uching lines..

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

This was a great poem! I loved the second stanza! I've felt similarly so nice job!
Charisma*