Wow, this is written really good...i think i mite no what itz about lol...but i like it, lotz of ppl could relate to it..keep it up and take care, i love seeing more poems in here of yourz! haha
~Luv Alwayz Lanner

Nicely written - I like your strcuture - It works well with these sad subjects. Well written.

Peace. [Sole]