Wow what an emotional poem... i really like how detailed it is in its descriptions...probably cuz i can relate...thanks for the comment...your a very talented writer

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This poem is very descriptive and detailed. I can understand where you are coming from. Good job keep it up!

That's cazy, I know so many people who cut and I'm happy that you realized you have something to live for because you may be sad but you make everyone else sad when you cut. that's what friends are for.

5/5 keep up the good work -jorden

(Mine's not 'real good')
Really great piece of work.

That's..well..
It's like that for me aswell, I don't cut anymore though, since it doesn't hurt and.. I don't know.

I live only because of the hope of having the one I wrote about.

This is an ace poem!!!!
Thanks for your comment btw
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Verry nice, i found cutting it to obvious so i've been using neadles

That was an excellent poem, really deep... i no things get hard in life, but theres always a brighter day... eventually things will get better, u just gotta stay positive and look for those days even when there is so much bad... but the things u go thru is what makes u the poet u r today... dnt waste ur talent, ur awsome... things will get better, just believe...
~ lisha

This is a great poem..i can feel your emotions when i read it..but remember that everything will turn out fine and there are plenty of ppl that care about you. theres no use in ruining your life for one persons absence of love or care. keep up the wonderful work!

Hey u took the words outa of my mouth i understand everything u described!!! u do good work!! and im glad u liked mine 2...oh and i added u 2 my favorites

I have read this one before but didnt comment it, but anyway 5/5. i know how you feel in this one *sigh*

I love this.. i can sence the expression in this one.. awesome job 5/5

Good poem. The flow was good but to me there really wasn't a good 'story' behind it. other then that 5/5

I enjoyed this poem. Though i felt it owuld of been better in sadness depression catagorie. Ok well this poem is a quite cliche subject on the whole. But cliche as it may be i can relate to it quite well. And well after i read the line; "I want to get rid of the pain and i succeed..." this is what i want to stay to you. The pain comes back doesnt it? It always does. It doesnt help you really. But i have noticed this poem is reallu old and submited and comparing it with your other poems i have to say you have improved as you used punctuation. Just work on the structure next time yeah? Still this poem is quite meotional and another peice taht people can relate to. You good att that arnt you? Lol. Keep writing. Thanks for comments. x