This is a great poem...although all i have to say is that you should put this in stanzas instead of in a paragraph...otherwise its a great poem... and thnx for you comment it means a lot to me...

~!Sandra!~

Very very good! 5/5

Very good...I kind of know what you mean....keep it up!-xxx-

Omgod! ..that left me speechless ..firstly ..thanks for the comments :) awesome! .. nd bak to ya poem ..
amazing job, really heartfelt ..youve put alot of emotion into your poetry ...lolz one word
AMAZING!!!

Wow this poem is really good. I like the repition sometimes it seems to ruin a poem but here it only made it better. I really hope your doing ok. I would be more than happy to talk and listen if you would like. You seem to be very good at letting things out in poems I like it. I'm gonna add you to my favorites :). 5/5

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Loved the poem 5/5

Hey, this was a little different than the other poems I have read. I like it though. The repetitivity of that one line had an awesome effect, it made the poem so great. I think the format could change, but that's just me. I personally find it hard to read a poem that stretches from one side of the page to the other.
Great poem.

Thats agood poem i like it!
~!ugly & unloved!~

*bows down* nuff said =)

You've taken an interesting tone for this poem. Yet it is direct and clear, and the atmosphere compensates for structure of poem.I like your use of the Grim Reaper, it works out very well. A very interesting read indeed. Nice work.