Comments : Forgetting you and the pain!!

  • 18 years ago

    by FoundHim

    *Why does it have to felt like this
    When can I forget and let it go
    Even though I pretended like I dont care
    But you know the feeling is always there
    Once a week I have a dream about you
    Because the memories are haunting me
    And I really, really do miss you*

    I feel this way right now...my bf who i really really love broke up wit me not too long ago and this part really expresses how I feel....this is a great poem for your first...good job

    ~!Sandra!~

  • 18 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Wow, it like of the time I wanna say those words myself, your poem is making me feeling good to understand. Pretty good! Keep writing.. Looking forward to read more, u are a good poet!