I wrote this and its about thios guy who i shared my first "special moment" with if you catch my drift. He told everyone what happened and i took him back them broke up with him again because he's an @$$ hole.

You are trying to hard to rhyme... And that makes the story hard to understand... but u have the right idea in mind... just use more words. let your heart do the talkin... Gave u a 4/5!!!!

Take care and thnx for ur comment on my poem... its appreciated

::MELI::

Let me know when u have new poems... I want to check them out!!!!