Well said. beautifully expressed.good job-xxx-

Well done that was expressed well
i liked the rhyme effect.
good work keep it up
xxALLYxx

Hmm. Good effort, but I think your rhyming interferes with your actual content. Personally, I don't think it's long enough, but I can see your angle. Just seems like it needs improving on.
However, I do like this line:
"That you're being emotionally raped.
By her and her circles,"
'Circles' is a general comment, leaving the reader open to interpretation. I like writing where everybody can feel they relate, even if indirectly so.
I think you could work harder and make it something special.x

Wow.... absolutely amazing!! i really hope you're all right. stay strong and take care,
-xXx-

This poem was very good. very well written. 5/5

This poem was real because it was like I was reading you talking or reading inside your mind. It was an insite into you as a person. The only thing I would say is that at the beginning the poem is rhyming but is was really forced and soon after you dropped the rhyming all together. I would recomend that you go back and change the rhyming part and add stronger words that will bring your meaning out instead of just rhyme. I am not trying to be offensive so please don't take in that way, because it is just some advice.

-Tainted Mikochan

A highly original topic once again and the words you use are so true. I find your way of righting fresh, interesting and creative Keep It Up
All the Best
Sondos

Wow this is amazing i love it.

Very true; good things don't always happen to good people. 5/5.