This is a good poem i know how you feel. thanx for commentin on my poem it means a lot. but good poem again. it awesome.
lauren

Its really good and i can definitely relate to it. good work, i like the flow of it

Hey,
This poem reminds me of what I'm going through right now, I have been going through something liket his for well over a year now, My ex still wants to go out with me but we have problems blah blah... anyway.
This is such a true emotion poem and the being friends part is harder then it sounds. that is so true, I know what you mean there.

Keep up the good work and I hope things go well for you!

Volunteer worker for FR&C

-Josiah

I love this poem, i can really relate to it. 5/5

That is exactly how I feel, I really like this poem! keep writing. shannon

Liked it...nice flow!...5/5

Hey! its me! first and foremost, thanks for reading the poem from the contest I just wrote another one tonight, called "why me"

Anyways, enough about that! this poem totally hit me! like, I hit the heart, I def. now how this goes...pretty much love can suck..great job!

~eddy~

Amazing poem !!

This poem was very sweet and i really liked it, i know what you mean by what you say, but the last line doesn' seem to mix in with the rest of the poem, there was a good flow, until the last line, just thought you should look into that, but over all it was a good poem

Great poem..sad though but still good mate

WOW amazing poem
truly wonderful , excellent use of words
keep it up

Hey.....that was gr8...so lovely.....i can relate to that....5/5

keep it up dear and thanx a lot 4 commenting on mine.....

luv,
Bharti

O WOW! i KNOW alot of people can relate to this poem. YOU JUST KEEP DOING BETTER AND BETTER, I LOVE UR WORKS.

I really liked the first stanza, you had a good use of language. You also said enough about your feelings with out being too over dramatic, which I liked very much. The thing I didn't like was the last line of the first stanza. Saying "posses" gives the idea she is his property and I think that is somewhat outdated in today's society.
The second stanza was good because it talked about the well known idea of trying to be friends, but if there are deeper feelings it never is as easy as it sounds. The only problem for me with this stanza was the last line again, the rhyme scheme doesn't work. For it to fit with the rest of the poem "sounds" needs to rhyme with "again" and it doesn't.
Apart from that good job, keep writing.

Aw this poem is so good! great job! i can definitely relate to it! 5/5*

I can relate........very good......keep writing sorry it took me a while to look at them...........
xoxo
Cassie

Ok first of all i have to say I LOVE THIS POEM!! you completly got what i wanted to say in a poem.. I know EXACTLLY(sp?) how you felt.. EXCELLENT job 5/5...

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Good poem..more description migth of helped but overall thsi is a semi-strong poem unto itself....keep it up hun.

lissa

I can relate to this poem....keep it up

Another light-hearted poem. Nicely written good use of the direct quoting too. Excellent!

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