Theres this girl...

by You-Destroyed-Me   Feb 18, 2006


Theres this girl I know
I see her everyday
She's miserable from head to toe
She's not as happy as she says
Outside she puts on a smile
But she's crying inside all the while
She pretends what they say doesn't bother her
She just laughs
But her eyes are pouring out invisible tears
She acts as she loves life
But really she feels like why not
its not like it would matter
I know this girl well
I even know her thoughts
She tries so hard to be perfect
But at the end of the day
She feels like she's not good enough
like life is sometimes too tough
This girl is part of me
Shes always there
Because I see her
When I look in the mirror.

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  • 18 years ago

    by >> Beautifully Mistaken

    I Love It. Keep Writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Megan

    Wow. that was amazing. im so sorry you feel that way. I used to feel that way but I overcame it..I was letting my depression get the better of me for a while, but I'm starting to get better at not letting it controll me. No matter what, you should always fight the urge to cut or harm urself, because in the end it's all gonna come right back and slap u in the face, because its hard to overcome the temptation. well anyways..great poem. i liked it alot. keep up the good work. and take care of urself.
    xoxo
    Megan

  • 18 years ago

    by miracle

    Hi
    first of all I don't know what you've been through And I don't know wich pain you felt But I'm really sorry for that
    I just wanted to react because there are so many people, teenagers who don't wanna live no more Who are in a big depression And always having pain But I don't understand why you don't fight, you make poems wich are beautifull but when I went to your profile and the first thing I read was Yes i cut myself and if you don't like it screw you I found it really odd If you surrender to your pain How do you think it will ever be less, only you can change your life and only you can make the pain less Don't let that depend on someone else.. There are so many people that fight or search for help that want to live farther but people such as you make them believe it's not worth it, I'm not having critic on you as I know this can be hard or something, but you should get some help and you should try to make the best of life Maybe you do but by looking at your profile I think you don't I first believe people didn't cut themselve for the attention, but with you I'm doubting 'Cause your making it so clear Well This is what I wanna say, don't get all mad or something. And your poems ARE beautifull don't get me wrong.