by Bill Turner Feb 18, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Screaming eagle looking tough and dangerous |
by Mark
Nice choice of words, helps it become real visual.. and scary |
by CUT UP angel
Love it! |
I thought it was good. A bit scary, a few guys killing people grotesquley just to make sure the child had a secure future. Nice touch. |
This has a really strange feel to it, but i like it. I really like the twist at the end, despite the crime, the justification is there, even if there could be other means. Very graphic :) x |
by emily
U r way to old to be writing poems but it was really good. |