Holy crap, Bill! That was a wild and crazy write, I love it! Your are excellent with these dark poems, a little scary I must say! ;o)

Certainly an original piece. I love the stark contrast between the darkness of the parent's means of providing what could be considered an almost virtuous course for their ill son...Anarchy for the sake of love...very cool. As usual the use of language was exquisite =)

I love this poem it was really good.

U r way to old to be writing poems but it was really good.

This has a really strange feel to it, but i like it. I really like the twist at the end, despite the crime, the justification is there, even if there could be other means. Very graphic :) x

I thought it was good. A bit scary, a few guys killing people grotesquley just to make sure the child had a secure future. Nice touch.

Love it!

Nice choice of words, helps it become real visual.. and scary