Wow i am amazed you are wonderful i love everyone of your poems tell me when you have a new one

tabby

Aww... that was great i loved it.
Keep up the great work.
Emma 5/5

So true in many ways, I love it and like always its another good piece of work from you! the flow was just so neat and nicely done, I liked the wording you used in it to.

Anyway good job I loved it

-Josiah
Volunteer worker for FR&C

Great poem. Very emotional. But I beleive that if someone is willing to change for you, they are worth atleast one final chance. If they won't change, its not going anywhere. Thats from the heart.

~Anthony

Hey, Great poem! Lovin' this verse "I want to forgive you and start all over,
But everyone tells me to just move on.
Should I listen to them and walk away,
Or should I help find what's already gone."

Keep it up, It's good to see that even though this person must have hurt you, your still trying to make things better =] good job 5/5
luv natz x0x

Cool

Cool

This was very good, sad but wonderfully written...

::MELI::

That was absolutely unreal! It was really touching, and so true to everything that I'm going through now!
Your an inspiration...cheers mate!

This was a great poem and i loved it! you did a great job and i hope you keep up with it.

I really enjoyed your poem, very thorough and well written. Some advice (and please excuse me as I dont know the full story Atomic) - friendship isnt just about the good times but the bad more importantly, I hope you and your friend can find the strength to work thru whatever problems you are having and support each other again.
Keep up the great work...
Eirisa

Thats is so sad, And so F#@king GOOD!!
wow thats an awesome poem..
But im sorry about you hurting..I know how it feels to hurt so much..

nick

I like this poem a lot ! I love it and I gave you a 5

Wow, this was amazing! I have felt very similiar emotions but could never word it. I really liked it. =]

I saw your post in the myspace group, so I figured I'd check you and your poems out.

5/5