I am intrigued by your writing, its so pure and true. I admire all types of poetry, but yours is absolutely amazing. ~Mia

I am intrigued by your writing, its so pure and true. I admire all types of poetry, but yours is absolutely amazing. ~Mia

I am intrigued by your writing, its so pure and true. I admire all types of poetry, but yours is absolutely amazing. ~Mia

That poem was perfect. It kept just about the same amount of sylebles(ehh spellcheck) If you ever made this into a song it would be perfect. I bet she loved it. This poem has a little humor in it.And it shows that you love her. You did great 5/5.
-Vino

Aw this is so touching and heartfelt, i love this, it is full of emotion and i could definetly feel how much you care about her, and haha wow i love the last verse lol, aw clearer than aquafina lmaoo thats the uniquest thing ive read yet lol

How sweet!

Thats so gorges......ur girlfriend must feel so special knowing ur writing such sweet poems about her........shes a luky girl

Awwwww. so sweet. 5/5.

Awwwww. so sweet. 5/5.

Awwwww. so sweet. 5/5.

Awww what a wonderful poem!! You must really love your girlfriend!!! great job! *Amanda*

Hey cool poem it was actually really good keep writing more poems ok iight bye.