Wow thats really good, and a really powerful message, good work a definite 5/5

Great Job! .. its really hard telling sum1 how u feel even though it kills u to keep it in and that sux =/

A very great poem even though it is very sad.. I hope that you are ok.. Keep the go0d work..

God bless

I've Known These Kind Of Stories,
but That Doesn't Make It a Bad Poem.

5/5

I also have a secret crush bit hes not dead..hehehe..i love your poem

Hey,that one was very touching...

All because of love unspoken

We are responsible for all our tears and pain in this life

5/5
touched...
This happens to most of us.We just wait for the right time and right words....just to know in the end that... we have lost everything.Love unspoken hurts

5/5
touched...
This happens to most of us.We just wait for the right time and right words....just to know in the end that... we have lost everything.Love unspoken hurts

I get the feeling this is going to happen to me
,ive told her already but she i dont think she see
,how the tears i cry fall to earth
,because of the feelings i have for her.
i feel like a blind man,walking in the dark,
she honestly doesnt know,she is forever in my heart

Very touching indeed,just touching,really get to you alot,if u can relate,and thats how i feel i failed to "pull the trigger" on love and missed my shot,but now,i have soneone new and worth dying for,beautifull poem ,srry about my dumb story,but i wanna let u know,i can relate.

Very touching indeed,just touching,really get to you alot,if u can relate,and thats how i feel i failed to "pull the trigger" on love and missed my shot,but now,i have soneone new and worth dying for,beautifull poem ,srry about my dumb story,but i wanna let u know,i can relate.

I am Crying. .very painful

This is so heart touching..something,many can relate..i loved this!

Very nice, heart touching poem..