That's Realy Deep.. And I Seem To Relate To It. :s It's Realy Realy Good.. You're An Amaizing Writer!

Wow....another greatn poems.....good job!

Wow. this is so good!

"Her past she tries so hard to avoid
From the sea breeze and the tide that swept away all her dreams"

i love that part. a truly excellent poem.

Very powerful words. you have real talent. keep it up. 5/5
-k-

Is a sad poem but i like. good job5/5

Very strong and deep words i like it keep up the good work

timehealsallwounds*