by SammiBABY Feb 19, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
With dignity I was entranced by eyes of blue, |
by bOlly danCer
Tlkin bout eyes.i like the colour of urs..lol..its tru.....lovely poem huni...yet again 5/5......ur a very talented girl sammi n an amazing friend too. |
by Cuddles
So perfect, Sammi, so perfect!!!!!!! I think I'll post this poem on my wall. It reminds me of a guy I used to like in high school. He, coincidentally, has blue eyes. This poem is so wonderful. |
by Ariana
Really nice and original. I liked the rhyming scheme you chose it fitted nicely. I got the impression you were sorta telling us a story throughout this, whatever the intention is, it works very well. Nice job :) |
by Lithium
Oh sammi baby i love this poem its fantasic flows nicely and ur use of words are fab great work honestly hun well done xox sam |
This is a gorguz poem, it is really good, i really like this poem...=) luv ya Courtney xoxoxo |