Very sweet words you have here good work xox sam

Such a wonderful poem everything was so kind and awsome!
Great peice of work here!

Good job!

Thanks for you c/r

-Josiah

Awesome poem. really sweet. very well written 2. well done

I really liked it excellent job keep it up.. 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

I def. feel this pome..keep it up ur GOOD.

lissa

Nice last stanza! ^_^ I liked this too. It was sweet. And the flow was good awswell. I also liked how you opened up the poem. Laying green grass. Very good imagry. Keep it up hun! 5/5

.x.TaLeEe.x.

"and how your the only one who cares"
you're, not your
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I wasn't entirely sure that the person you were talking to was a person at all. I mean, it totally could have been, but it could have been the sky, or the clouds, or something like that. That would have been cool.

If I were to work on improving anything, it'd be setting up a bit stronger of a rhythm by making a more set syllable-per-line count. It can vary from line to line, but I'd suggest making it standardized from stanza to stanza