That is a very good poem. And the story behind it makes it even better! Very special and beautiful!

Wow.. im so suprised no one has commented.. this is a remarkable peice.. it just made me feel so alive.. i could see myself in every situation. i really admire this work! it was wonderful.. my best regards to johnathan he was a great writer. so sorry for his loss.. but if you do find any more poems he wrote i would love to read them.
take care, sarah