I don't know why your voters were so harsh on you. It's a very low rating but it shows what a strong bond you have with your sister. It's very good for a starter, keep writing and posting. It was very nice, K

Excellent job sophie, i look forward to the next that you write keep it up!

Well, im not really that proud as im a rubbish poet!

Hey dont let me ever hear you say that your rubbish Sophie!
You are my little sister and i am always gonna be proud of you.
You poems are great your only young and one day you will be kicking my A$$!