Still fading

by Ali   Feb 19, 2006


You said we would be together
forever..
I hoped, prayed you weren't lieing,
but inside I was slowly dieing,
I loved you,
and still do.
But with all this pain you've caused,
my life has quickly paused.
When you said good-bye,
I could only try,
to do the same,
but new I had only one aim,
to make you realize,
and open your eyes
to me and you,
and how we once were so very true.
But here in this place my heart is aching,
And I am slowly breaking,
But I will always be waiting
In this dark and gloomy space, still fading.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kys Dirty Little Secret

    Aw very touching poem once again thanks for the comment if i didn't already thank you i don't remember lol WELL i loved this piece keep up the good work luv kal

  • 18 years ago

    by hunter

    Good. poem but sometimes it better to give up it's less pain that way but every day you can still wounder

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    Do write more poems. you got the talent man.go for it::)

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    A t0uching piece. very deep. thank u s0 much f0r the c0mment 0n my w0rk

  • 18 years ago

    by Jimmy Jr.

    That was a poem that really satisfied me