by BloodScars
Hey...great job! again...havnt been on here i a while so i have lots of your poems to read |
I love the third stanza to peices. The first one had a few choppy parts... Read it over, or maybe it's just the way my mind reads it, heh. |
I love the third stanza to peices. The first one had a few choppy parts... Read it over, or maybe it's just the way my mind reads it, heh. |
by J Lau
Nicely done. Keep up the good work! |
I love your poems, Noni. Keep writing, because they are always very good, and they always will be! |