Thats a happy thought! nice poem though, well said but very very sad hun. your a very fast commenter woah nelly=) thankyou for it, keep up the great work

Jenn

Hey, thanks for your comment, your a gr8 writer xx

Thnx 4 the comment, i rly liked this poem. its v. imaginative and paints a clear picture in the readers mind. well done and keep writing!
xxx

Good poem. i like your wording. 5/5
lauren

Hey I liked this poem. you did an awesome job on it. GO YOU! Bye!

Hey thanks for commenting....
great poem
5/5

Such a sad poem
good, but sad

W0w!!! ... and you were saying my poems were powerful? i think you have it wrong because yours are .. this one is amazing!! ..really unique and different! i love it ...such meaning!

Wow...so excellent. so sad...but oh so wonderful. i loved it.

Wow. i really like this one. it explains how im feeling right about now. thanks for my comments by the way

Great job!!!! my only thing is...try putting this in a stanza form or something like mine....it would really make this and your other poem i read (the last piece of my heart) look........a lil better and they would look longer....but hey this is only my opinon=] great job tho...

~!Sandra!~

This was a good poem, but the format is a little off at sometimes, along with the flow. Other than that it's pretty good. Keep up the good work, this is a very powerful piece of work.

Thats a really good poem!
~!ugly & unloved!~

Wow i hope you have friends unlike this poem unless your a loner but thats cool to cuz people can get really annoying and hard to trust but good poem
carly