I am glad to be the 1st person to rate your poem... it has alot of emotion yet i know this poem seems more like a topic to write a longer more detail'd poem... i could use some work on mine too. try to work at it. and eddit this one,,, if u want
just trying a little bit of constructive critisism....

I disagree with Astrid. Anyone that knows the feeling is toched by this poem. awesome job

I disagree with Astrid. Anyone that knows the feeling is touched by this poem. awesome job. I had one by the same title and saw yours when I was searching for mine.