I like it, u show the ending that most people probably dont even know exists.

Great poem,i think people really do need to know there is a better day ahead! i was a manic depressant and failed on many suicide attempts, it is very hard but even i have found my way to the other side! you have just got to believe its there and keep going! gr8 poem keep wrighting!! emma xx

Very good poem. The only thing that you need to work on is the length of some of the lines. Some could be brocken down into two and so on. But other then that I really like this poem:) 4/5