This is what i feel

by m i s s k a t e l y n   Feb 19, 2006


You tried to take your life
now i want to take mine

I love you so much
it's not just a hunch

you just don't know
how far I would go

to get you
to keep you

my heart wants you here
I want you close

The story you will never know
is now written in my heart

So tender it will stay there forever
you are my one true love

I know that because it
is written in the sky above

I will never forget you
or this one sad night

I want you here
you are my light

in my heart your name
is written In bold
and it is there
to have, to hold

the burden of this night
so dark and cold

my soul, bleeds
my heart cry's

the tears burn as if
they were flames

now I might just go
drown myself in the
ocean I have cried

now when you die
we may meet again
but if not then
this has to be the end.

*this has been edited.* * i would also like to point out that,i wrote this about two years ago, and i no longer feel this way. i have met an amazing guy,who has taken my heart completely:]*

<3katelyn.

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  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Very very beautiful. what is with the andrew's of the world?! i had a guy named andrew that i felt very similarly too. thanks so much!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla Kay

    This is amazingggg!

    The ironic thing I feel the same way about a guy named Andrew,haha.

    Great X one-million job!

    :]]

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Ok powerful poem. it is kind of hard to read it because there arent any spaces to seperate it but i like it. im sticking to a 4\5 but it is a wonderful poem and very very powerful. love it.

  • 17 years ago

    by reborn

    This seems like a nice poem but the layout makes it almost impossible to really appreciate it. please have a look at it n put some (space and enter)s in there! 4/5

  • This is a very sweet poem

    Lambchopkutie
    Mwahh

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