Wow. You poem gave me great incite into your views on life. The idea of justice vs. mercy is an age old ideal and as you put it, a very religious idea. Justice is important, but mercy is what everyone wants in their time of need. You worded your poem most elequently and had a beautiful point. Thank you for asking me to read it, I really enjoyed it.

-Tainted Mikochan

I love this poem! i read a bunch of your poems and i love them all, but this one was my favorite. you are very talented. 5/5
& thanks for your comment, it meant alot

First, let me start off by thanking you for commenting on my poem "sorry." it was a big compliment coming from a great writer like yourself. i really liked this piece. it was very straight forward, and being religious myself, i thought it was very true and spoken very wisely. u have so much talent and your writing shows it. i love how you reference adam and eve so much. like each of your poems is a new beginning and a new thought. great writing. keep it up!!

Wow this is wow i loved it you amaze me each time great job!!!!

love always
tabby

Amazing! I think I have read your work before and I love all of it. Keep up the wondeful work.

~Juls~

"In darkness we sleep with an awakening on the way." MIchael, I've only been on this website to look at your updated works.... You exemplify a rational thought-provoking individual, with words and words that make stories alive again within me... Thank you for your inspiration.

Check out my poems sometime...

Hina

Wow Michael, I've read a couple of your poems. I'm hooked! The words, the feelings, the fact that none of the rhyming feels forced! Amazing!