I really liked this poem it shows that even popular people are not always perfect. As we see them and as other people see them. 5/5 don't worry about it being long It tells a story and I really like long poems but I will read short ones. But long poems are my favorite keep up the great work

I liked the poem although I thought that it was hard to follow. Your thoughts seem a bit scattered in this poem....just my opinion though...but anyways....you seem really talented...keep on writing...and thanks a lot for the comment on my poem...it means a lot...luv yas mwah

-kayla-

This poem was basically amazing.
The last stanza hits hard. I know how that feels...people think its perfect when you'd do anything to be living another life.
Brilliant job. 5/5 for sure.
- Stef