Oh sweety what a sad poem. I can tell it came right from your heart. So beautiful, so emotional =(

Nice written, it flows. I can also relate to it. Oh hun =( It really brought tears into my eyes. I can just feel the hopelessness and the pain.

Very well done sweety, hope you are ok. Remember, I love you

Lotsaaaa love -xxx-

Hey darl a t0uching piece l0t 0f em0ti0n in this. very tuching always here f0r u!

l0ve always d0ra

Hey Hun,

Nicely done, very depictive=) Keep it up and don't think about the block ythink about the tiny door in the middle, that says "ESCAPE" over it=D

I love yeh
Jenn

As i sit here alone, protesting over who i should be.

I LOVE that line. I hate to repeat myself but there's only so few adjectives that describe how awesome i think your poems are. So I'll make one up. Fantabu-perfectous.

*nods*

But really, awesome poem.

Lvz A, xx

Awww , this is wonderful hun, i can definetly relate to it in some sense, its also very expressive aw, hang on hun it'll get better,xxoo

Huni i l0ve this p0em....i have so much 2 tell y0o babe....i went 2 a party and got so drunk and now josies cut at me and i dnt think she will ever 4give me c0z i acted like a s*ut and i told people stuff about her c0z i was so drunk and i didnt no what i was saying!! and s0mething happened this m0rning with my step dad and i need 2 tell y0o...i h0pe ur ok babe h0oz dis ab0ut?? im s0 s0rrii i cant b ther 4 u right n0w but ur 4ever in my heart and we will w0rk out a day 2 catch up nayb near my b\'day?? luv y0o s0 much

Ohh hun that was really great , very nice emotion in it, keep writting and take care. xox Rach

Excelent poem, but don't you dare go giving up on me girl, don't you dare.

I love your poems its like you are saying everything that i want to say. you are really good at writing. i always look forward for when you put a new poems on this site. keep on writing.

I really really lke this poem!! you did a great job getting it all out in words!! i love the third one down the best!! nice work keep it up!! and thanks so much for the comment!!

Woww. I love that!!
Yess, i do remember you.
Haha looking were you?
Blake is excellent thankyou =]
Hope you're doing okayy.