I thought this poem was well constructed and very very good! awesome job!

Wow. This poem is very heartfelt and passionate. I was amazed by it's power! I can picture this girl's life, your life? I can feel her pain, being locked away to save others and "save herself." Being forced to be alive and live as an empty shell because people are keeping her alive. Wow, again. A very passionate poem love. Huggles. Love ya okay? Hope you are alright.

-Tainted Mikochan

This is so powerfully sad, but beautifully written! Excellent poem, great job!