Wow this peom was really good and flowed really well! great job!!

I like this poem especially because of the topic you choose to write it on, and how you ended up writing it. You covered a lot of the questions that often taunt and persecute the human soul while expressing the fully and with great depth. I certainly did enjoy this poem. Thanks for pointing it out to me.

-Tainted Mikochan

Oooo good poem this is a great flowing poem and i love the words excellent job

tabby

I love the flow of this poem and the wording. Keep writing.

--Take care

I liked it all except the last line of the first stanza. It just didn't seem to have the impact I thought it should have had. You can change it if you want, it's still good even if you don't...

But good job, I still liked it ^_^

-Tony

Great job. I loved it.. 5/5

Great write! Nice flow and deep. Keep writing. 5/5

Noni, I think that this is fantastic work. Very insightful and diplomatic. You offer people something to think about without coming to a conclusion. You make a very precise point out of many different scenarios and aspects of life, and you are very concentrated on a very specific meaning.

At first I was concerned about letting you be an assistant purely because of your age, but when I joined P&Q I was freshly 16, and age has very little to do with poetic talent, which you have tons of. I look forward to working with you and getting to know you and your work better and thank you from the bottom of my heart for helping out with this.

You're fantastic.

This is probably my favorite poem I have read of yours so far.....I loved the who meaning and you expressed it very well with your emotion. it could have been organized a little better but none the less was a great poem.

~Retniapdoolb~
*Keep On Writing*

Amazing... you certainly know more words than I do...