When It's Gone

by venezuelanlove11   Feb 19, 2006


When we were 2 gether
we fought alot
when we got back
it was the same

But now that we wont be
together i really miss you
and wish for your smile
and wish for you lough
and wish that someday
i can have you back

Here in my arms when
i will never let u go
maybee someday my mom
will just leave us alone

but if not now
maybee latter
but someday she\'ll realize
that you were my savior

Mi 1st Love

Tu Siempre Seras Mi Grosero!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by anna

    Very touchy.. painfull relationsip i have been through this. and it's not easy...

  • 18 years ago

    by Luke

    It's Realy Good.. But Like Most Poems.. I Think They Seem Better With Rhymes.. You Should Try Loads Of Different Formats Of Rhyming.. and See Which One Suites You.