Hey
great poem!
short but sweet
and i like the ending
mexx

Wow this poem is really good. its sad. i like how you can make it this good with little words. hey thanx for the comment, it was greatly appreciated. 5/5
lauren

Wow that is really good. I love how it seems so normal and then at the end it just turns to this sad place. It is really hard to write good sad poetry and you did it.

How sad......
it was really good
i had to read it twice to completly undrstand.......................
i liked it though
awesome
~HazE

Wow... ANOTHER good, short, to the point poem. and i loved the last few lines... it took me a minute but i got it.

another 5/5
-Allanah