by Krathia Feb 19, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Looked into the mirror, |
by Not Enough
Hmm.. this is an okay poem. The flow is great. The rhymes are a llittle off at few parts but still good. But it seems like it's re-written. Like I've read it too many times, and there's nothing really new about it. But it's still a good poem. I think you could've made it a little more unique though. |